deliasherman (deliasherman) wrote,
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Can I just say. . .

that Chapter Twelve is Dreadful? I've pinned it here and I've pinned it there, and there's no pleasing it. It keeps throwing out paragraphs like pseudopods. Whenever I think I've got it surrounded, I find a sentence dangling, or that I've left out an important plot-point. And my sentence-maker seems to be on the fritz.

Ah, well. Maybe I'll have a brain tomorrow.
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